Interesting...
It would seem that you have alot of talent and that this could turn out to be a really good flash. I thought that you showed to have alot of potential and the only thing letting you down was the lack of graphics. Try putting some colour in and fix up the sketchieness (My New Word :D) and you could be looking at a portal award of some kind!
So yer, given you a five for know but hope to see it again done up. Nice Work!